2006考研英语作文

1.我写了一下2006年考研英语的小作文,就100多字,劳累谁能给看看

就我个人观点 作文分不会很理想 我是高三的学生 以高考作文的水平 我们是30分满 我看是在18分这个基本分左右 不会比这高了感觉

开头这个句子有问题As known to all of us,As 在这里要做主语的 少了个is

who're badly need应该改成who need financial aid badly原来的句子表达混乱 by是表动作发出人的 在这里楼主你弄混了

and不会出现在句首的 不符合英文表达的习惯

第二段开头want sb can是中文表达而且是错的 英文表达一般是 I hope you can 。.

who is under 12-year-old ,a girl ,and lack of money to complete her study.这里的逗号以及and 运用混乱，逗号之间的可以做插入语 解释说明，and连接的是两个并列成分 而这里用的比较乱了就 句子成分不明朗 其他的小问题我就不仔细说了

这篇文章的硬伤在于语言运用熟练度准确率不够好 虽然可以明白你所要表达的意思 但是很多不符合英语的习惯表达 而且出现了一些不该有的语法错误 最明显的就是and or等连词的不当应用

再有一点就是 书信要有书信的语气和格式 文章中只有最后有书信语常用的

I'm looking forward to recieving your reply出现 语气你是要申请帮助寻找合适的孩子 语气委婉点好 最后的应该有Yours,Li Ming这样的结尾

文章涵盖了要点 表意算是完成了 但是语言功夫不是很到家 没有复杂结构 高级词汇以及好的词组 句型出现 出彩点少 不会离基本分差太大

10分的话5到6分吧 说的直接了点 楼主别生我气哈。

2.急求两篇考研英语

小作文：write an inquiry letter for a jop vacancy as a accountant to work in XX。

Greetings, prospective Lenovo interns! This year, our program is heading into its 10th year of bringing China's best and brightest to the nation's capital to help China's most successful technology company improve its reach into the next generation. We expect that 2006 will be the most exciting one yet! Why, you might be asking yourself, do I want to be a part of this demanding, yet rewarding program? Check this out: You have the chance to see the inner workings of Lenovo's marketing department from an insider's perspective! Over the course of just three months, you can build lasting relationships with some of China's most influential business leaders! Get access to first-class on-the-job training that is useful in a number of fields post-graduation! The successful applicant will have a bachelor's degree (or equivalent), and will have a working command of English. While the internship is unpaid, housing, food, and transportation are all provided.第二篇 大作文：stress in modern life。As everyone knows, stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. As the pace of modern life continues to increase, we are always feeling on the go from morning till night. And it is hard to slow down. Therefore, stress goes hand in hand with the life in a competitive society. Different people, however, think of stress quite differently. Some believe that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the opinion that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and give purpose to life. Others argue that stress contributes to one's mental decline and hence endangers his health. According to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body. Personally, I'm in favor of the former view. I think it is impossible to avoid stress when one is entirely devoted to the career he pursues. In my opinion, it is only when the stress gets out of control that it can lead to poor performance and ill health.。

3.考研英语写作180篇

【红宝书】考研英语写作---（图画+话题）180篇，是第一本以图画和话题形式编著的考研英语写作，其2005、2006、2007、2008、2009、2010、和2011版经过前几届考生的实际检验，获得了广泛的好评。特别是本书彻底揭示了考研英语写作的命题思想和写作规律，连续数年准确地预测了大、小作文。如：“自信的重要性”一文命中2007年大作文；“竞争与合作”命中2008年大作文；你如何看待因特网？”及“把握网络的尺度”命中2009年大作文；“中西文化的交流与融合”命中2010年大作文；“假日旅游”命中2011年大作文.

本书在保持其原有优势的基础上，进行了全面修订，使其更能满足考生备考、获取高分的需要。本书的最大特点是简洁明了、注重高效、强调实战。并使考生抓住考研英语写作的命题思想、掌握写作规律，在较短时间内快速提高英语写作应考能力 ，为在考研写作中获取高分奠定坚实的基础。

【红宝书】考研英语写作（图画+话题）180篇 — 7大特点

1.彻底揭示了考研英语写作的命题思想和写作规律，连续数年准确预测了大、小作文。

2.以形式（图画和话题作文），最直观、最明了地阐释了考研英语写作的命题特点。

3.第一次强化概括了“三段式”写作法在考研英语写作中的突出作用。

4.将考研英语写作中的“用词、造句、语法、修辞”等知识点融入及其后的讲解中。

5.从写作词汇、写作句式、写作框架、写作语法等层面系统总结归纳了考研英语写作必备的精华资料——附赠《写作必备集粹》一本。

6.对本书所有写作短文都录制了优美、动听的高水平的美音朗读，以MP3格式供您下载。.

7.本书结构层次分明，重点突出，强调学练结合，在着重演绎180余个图画和话题的同时，为考生提供了“同类话题自测精练”，全书共涉及考研写作图画及话题300余个。

本书是最早的一本以图画和话题形式出版的考研英语写作精品复习资料。书中的大量图画和话题被同类书籍广泛“引用”。对此，若有疑问，则可通过网络搜索和书籍先后版本对比证实。

4.一篇考研英语作文2006年小作文申请信（资助一名贫困学生）Dea 爱

To Whom It May Concern, My name is Shan Zhou, a college student of Peking University, and I am writing in the hope of your assistance to find a needy child for whom I may provide financial support。

First and foremost I would like to declare that I possess the financial ability to implement this plan owing to my decent income from part-time jobs。 As to the candidate, I am hoping that he/she comes from an elementary school of the less developed areas of Western China, who is forced out of school。

I would like to pay for his/her tuition fee and other school expenses until he/she graduates from university。 Thank you for your time。

Yours cordially, Shan Zhou 。

5.一篇考研英语作文请帮忙改下谢谢2006年的大作文关于偶像崇拜As 爱

As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the handsome British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among young people。

In the first photo, Beckham's name appears on a young man's face。 The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face。

In the second photo, this young man is doing Beckham's chic hairstyle in a barbershop。 We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol's hairdo。

Undoubtedly, the photos have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the youth nowadays。 Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans。

Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols。 Generally speaking, young people are inclined to adore the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent。

In my opinion, idol worship, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can deeply influence the growth of young people。 If we simply worship the idols by imitating their hairstyles or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste us a great deal of money or time, endangering the efficiency of our work。

On the contrary, we will lead a positive and fruitful life if we endeavor to improve ourselves by bridging the gap between our models and us。 Therefore, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life。

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6.英语作文30词10篇

1.What fun I had last Sunday!Last Sunday,my classmates and I went to the moutains.We met at the school gate,then we went there by bike.When we got there,the sun was rising.How beautiful it was!We decided to climb the mountains.We played a game to see who was the first one to get to the top.I tried my best,but I failed.We were tiredl,but happy!2.Last weekend,On Saturday morning I got up at 6;30.After breakfast I did my homework at home.In the afternoon ,I played football with my friends on our playgroud.In the evening I watched TV with my parents at home.On Sunday morning I went to visit my grandparents with my mother.In the afternoon I went to go fishing with my grandpa.We had a good time .I went back home with my mother in the evening.What a wonderfu weekend !3.My vacation was very fun.I went to World Expo.There were many interesting building about China,Amrica and France.The Chinese building is tall.And I enjoyed beautiful things.I thought my vacation was very substantial.4.During my vacation,I went to World Expo with my family.While visiting the hall ,we fell in with a group of foreign friends.And we talked happily with a volunteer's help.Then we were interested a lot by some fun inventions.In a word,we had a good time in Shanghai,I hope I can spend vacation here once more.5.Last summer vacation,I visited Beijing with my parents,The weather was fine but a little hot.We visitded the Palace Museum,the Great Wall,Tian'an Men Square and a Beijing hutong,they are all so great and beaitiful.And i enjoyed lots of delicious and cheap food during the days.We also went shopping .My parents bought some beautiful clothes for me.I had a good time there.6.Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial.There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner.The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful.7.Last summer,I went to a village that was far away from our city.My parents and I went there to visit my uncle.I found it a beautiful place to live.The water was clean in the river,birds were singing in the trees,farmers were working hard in the field,and the moon at night was whiter than that in our town.The village was so nice that I didn't want to come back!8.Today,we were went to the beach.The weather liked fine.We were swam and played beach volleyball.Our lunch was very delicious.There people were very friendly.We had a great feeling.We also fished many big fish.They were very delicacy.We had dinner in a big restaurant.There were many nice food.We came back home was nine o,clock.9.Last weekend Tony was busy but happy.He did a lot of housework..He cleaned the room and washed the clothes.Because his mother had to work last Saturday.He did most of the housework for her.His sister had to study for the geography test.They were really busy.10July 22th Thursday sunnyToday I came to the city of Bishan,it's a beautiful city.It's the shoes centre of western china.I think many people know it.It developed very quickly these years.More and more people move in it.I'm pleased to be a Bishan people.July 26th Monday sunny Hello,everyone!I'm so pleased to tell you:I have finished my website.。

7.当幸福来敲门 哪一年的考研英语作文

The pursuit of happiness

This movie is one of my most loved the movie, is about a man, carrying out: the youngest, at the same time, life has been far wander. At the end of a mark above life, he is really a poorwithout any way. The more one disaster after another, his wife away from him. Since then, hisprodigious memory with his son and his, to a complete subversion of the life, finally, his life because of his diligence to completely change the fate.

It is one of my most loved movies.

8.考研英语大作文格式

考研英语写作题型 写作是英话试卷的第三部分，分为2节，共30分。

A节：根据给定情景写一篇应用性短文，100词左右（不计标点），形式包括：私人信件、公务公函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。满分1O分。

B节：根据提示信息作文，160~200词（不计标点）。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。

满分20分。 评分标准 A节应用文的评分侧重于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和用语的恰当。

可在文中使用提示语中的关键词，但使用其中的词组或句子则会被扣分。 B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性。

高分作文A节（9~10分）、B节（17~20分）的具体要求 1.很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 2.包含所有内容要点。

3.语法结构合理、词汇丰富。 4.语言自然流畅，语法错误极少。

5.有效采用多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰。 6.格式和用语恰当。

知道了考研英语作文考什么、怎么考，下面就让我们一起将通往高分作文路途上的拦路虎各个击破。 拦路虎一：文不对题 “文不对题”是考研英语写作中经常出现的问题之一，不少老师在阅卷时都遇到过这样的作文——内容充实，条理清晰，用词准确，却与题目规定的内容大相径庭，最后得分非常低。

考研英语写作是非开放性的，不可以随意创作，考生要严格按照题目的要求来展开文章。因此，在写作时认真审题是第一步。

审题不仅仅是要仔细读题目，还要准确地理解、提取题目中的信息点和内容，明确题目的要求。由于考试的时间有限，因此要求我们在考场上必须快速、准确地审题。

这就需要我们在平时多看一些题目，只有通过练习才能在考试时熟能生巧。 平时我们可以按照下面的步骤进行审题练习： （1）看题目，划出其中的核心词汇，找出作文内容的要点以及格式要求等。

（2）想一想这道题考的是什么方面的话题，应该从哪 方面展开，可以找到什么样的论据。（3）找到，与自己的构思进行对照、检验。

对于历年考研英语的作文真题，尤其是近几年的新题，建议大家动手练一练。仅在脑海中对作文题进行构思虽然节省时间，但是很多问题只有通过完整地写作才能发现。

考试时，要为自己留下一段比较充足的时间进行审题及构思，最好简略的列一个提纲，比如一两个关键词、中文或英文，甚至是一些简单的符号、标记都行。只要能够让自己明白，起到提示自己写作思路的作用就可以了。

拦路虎二：无话可说 在写作中考生常常遇到的一大难题就是无话可说，难以下笔。造成这种情况的主要原因是平时积累少。

纵观多年考研英语作文试题，我们可以发现，这些题目几乎从未涉及到偏、难、怪的话题，比如：2003年的话题：温室花朵经不起风雨；2005年的话题：养老“足球赛”；2006年的话题：偶像崇拜等等，只要考生在日常生活中能多看多想，在考试时就不会无话可说。 我们可以通过看中文的报刊来提升自己思想的深度与广度，作为写作时的论点与素材，也可以看英文文章来丰富语言。

有不少人都提倡多背文章，但是背书对很多人来说并不是一件容易的事。其实要起到培养语感、积累语言素材的作用，只要多读多看就可以了。

这些文章可以是你感兴趣的小短文，也可以是英文教材中的课文。在此，笔者还向大家推荐另一类材料，那就是阅读理解的题目，这些题目中的文章内容丰富，用语规范，长短也比较适宜，尤其是历年考研英语真题中的文章。

通过反复阅读，不仅有益于作文，也可以帮助我们加深对阅读理解部分出题方式的感受与体会。虽然这些文章不一定要背，但是要记住，我们对文章内容及其表达方式越熟悉，在需要时它就越能为我所用。

甚至在考试时，如果我们在阅读中看到好的句子，也可以把它划下来以便在写作文时借用。 当然，如果能在考前准备一些比较通用的小例子，把它记熟，对于丰富写作内容也是很有益的。

但由于考研作文对文章篇幅的要求，这些例子不要太复杂，最好能够用1~2句话说清楚即可；或者就选用一些人们耳熟能详的例子，仅用简单的语言概述一下即可。 比如，在使用爱迪生发明灯丝这个人们非常熟悉的例子时，我们就不必花太多笔墨讲述故事本身，而可以直接过渡到对观点的论述：We can learn from the experience of the great inventor Thomas Edison that sometimes a series of apparent failures is really a precursor to success。

拦路虎三：结构混乱 结构混乱是写作最为忌讳的问题。有话可说是写作最基本的要求，但要写好作文则必须把话说到点子上，把意思表达的清楚明白。

要做到条理清楚，就要求文章的结构合理。而只有在写作时理清思路，才能使作文结构清晰，从而方便评卷老师理解文章的层次。

文章不分段或者分段过多都是不合理的。现行的考研英语作文题目中一般会有三条要求，考生可以对应的写三段话进行回应。

一篇文章一定要有开头段与结尾段。首段不要太长，要开宗明义，明确表明自己的观点。

尾段的主要作用是使文章结构完整，主要为归纳或建议。文章主体部分的每一段都应该围绕一个主题来写，每一段都要有主题句，而且主题句最好是每段的首句，这样。