剑桥作文(剑桥雅思全真试题4第一篇小作文)

1.剑桥雅思全真试题4 第一篇小作文

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single asults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

T0T\是不是这个，，累死我了

2.剑桥雅思4听力原文和作文

老师们好！我是上海的11年的高考考生，因为觉得作文薄弱所以自己试着写了10年的上海作文题。

写好之后自己感觉还不错，但是似乎缺少一些有文化气息的事例，文笔也不够优美。

想请各位老师耐着性子看一下（有点长），估计一下大概可以得多少分（满分70），并且指出还有什么地方应该改进的，谢谢！！

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作文题目：

根据以下材料，选取一个角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章（不要写成诗歌）。

丹麦人去钓鱼会随身带一把尺子，钓到鱼，常常用尺子量一量，将不够尺寸的小鱼放回河里。他们说：“让小鱼长大不更好吗？”两千多年前，我国孟子曾说过：“数罟不入洿池，鱼鳖不可胜食也；”意思是，不要用细密的渔网在池塘里捕捞小鱼，这样才会有更多的鱼。

实际上，其中的道理也贯穿在我们现实生活中的许多方面。

作文全文：

“留下余地”的智慧

曾经，我总喜欢掐着时间办事：在最后一刻起床、在最后一刻叫作业、在最后一刻写完考场作文…曾经，我为自己这种“精确”洋洋自得。直到，一次在外地旅游时因为不小心迷路而错过了回家的火车——哎呀当时那真叫叫天天不应叫地地不灵——眼睁睁看着火车开走，我看看空空的钱包只好无奈地打电话向老爸求援，最后耗时费钱不说还误了之后的安排。从此我开始反思：我是不是办事该给自己留点余地呢？

其实，给自己留下余地是一种正确的生活态度。人在生活中每天都要处理数不清的事情，说不定哪天其中一两件就会因突发因素打乱安排。如果做事总之做得太绝，不留有一点回旋、应变的余地，不可避免地就会产生问题。君不见股票交易的广告、信息都会提醒股民：股市有风险，入市需谨慎？就是因为轻易把重金押在某一支股票上，一旦亏损就是万劫不复。类似的，保健品广告总嘱咐消费者“本品不能替代药物”，也是给自己留下了解释的余地。可见给自己留下余地就能让我们在处理生活中的事情时都有一条后路，使自己得以更轻松顺畅，不至于一有问题就满盘皆输。

在我给自己试着留下余地之后，我渐渐发现有时做人也需要给别人留下余地。这是一种对他人的尊重，也是人和人之间能顺畅交往的基石。就比如说学校里组织一个活动，参与者每个人都有自己的任务。那么我若是作为一个组织者，当有人忙于其他事情而疏忽工作时我是该硬逼他一定要“按时交货”呢，还是根据他的情况调整计划呢？甚至在有人对我心生不满向我提出意见时，我是该针锋相对大吵一架呢，还是心平静气讨论问题呢？答案不言而喻。显然，给别人留有余地，其实就体现在包容别人的错误和意见。退一步才往往是海阔天空，理智、和平的沟通才能发挥效果，让人与人的交流体现出它的价值。

事实上，生活中处处都有“余地”的存在。我们在给别人留下余地的同时，也在接受别人对我们的“余地”。甚至往大里说，生活本身乃至“命运”，都会时刻给我们留下回旋的余地。因此，如何学会利用，进而学会寻找自己的“余地”，就显得很重要了。犯错后接受别人给予的余地，那就要心存感激的同时努力上进、知错就改，这是知耻而后勇的上进心。遭遇困难或失败时不放弃，相信自己、相信生命，积极寻找出路或困难的解决办法，那是信念和毅力。至于如何在找到“余地”后重新开始，最终成功，这又是如何“抓住机遇”的课题了。可见，“余地”是人生中的一门大智慧，值得我们用心去学习。

关于“余地”的思考，以自身为起点、以他人为路线，最终千千万万个“个人”就绘制成了一幅“余地”的巨幅彩绘，融入到了社会的大环境中，和我们每个人息息相关。要让自己被“受压迫”的“余地”牵着鼻子走，还是要踩着厚实的“余地”一路前行？至少我已经得出了自己的答案。

问题补充：最主要是想得到估分和改进意见。。。谢谢各位老师了！

还有补充下，有没有哪位老师愿意留一下QQ或者网上联系方式？

3.雅思作文

The production and transportation of food has been greatly changed by modern technology. To what extent do you think this is a positive or a negative development? It is undeniable that the advancement of modern technology has given rise to countless changes of the production and transportation of food. While a host of people argue that the modern industrialization of food supply owes an explanation to the consumers of the products which have caused numerous controversies over the reliability and negative effects they may have on their consumers, I feel much obliged to be supportive as well as critical of such plausible but emotional perspective. Food industry has never seen such a boost in producing and transporting of food with advanced technologies. However, even if technologies are seen neutral, the compromises they have been made to meet the demands of business or more precisely the maximization of profits have been extremely detrimental to the reputation of the specific technologies being used. For instance, the junk food they provide in KFC, specifically the Nuggets. You don't even know which part of the chicken you are eating, for the machines have made it impossible for us mere mortals to distinguish the ingredients from the shape and smell of the product. More significantly, the way it is made, transported and served is highly industrialized and standardized, that is to say, this kind of food is rather a product of the pursuit of profits than a nutritious meal intended for keeping people healthy and happy. The people who insist that the manufacturers of the products should take the full responsibility of the problems have unfortunately neglected the positive aspect of the modern production and transportation of food and other factors like lack of exercising which may well contribute to their conditions. The efficiency of reallocating resources against its scarcity to the demands of humans as a whole has always been an unassailable reply to the questioning of modern capitalism and industrialization. And admittedly healthiness is not solely connected to the intake of food. One's exercising plan may carry more weight than his or her diet. Based on the elaboration of the argument, a conclusion can be easily made that food changes are less favorable when we compared with traditional diets, whereas they could be more welcomed if we be wiser when we start to appreciate the value of economic efficiency and balance our diets with regular workouts.。

4.求雅思剑桥9的test1大作文的翻译

Children's education has long been our concern since Plato once uttered, "Education is where a country should start at." However, it is still a controversial issue after all these years among people who are particularly concerned about it. Some people believe that it is parents' responsibility to cultivate their kids to be fully aware of what a social being should look like; others, whereas, argue that schools should take over this for the ultimate goal. In this essay, I would put this issue in question and further analyse both sides before presenting my personal perspective.

On one hand, parents, as the first touchers of their kids, should tell them how to differentiate right from wrong. Given the time parents spend with their kids, they can be more likely to observe everyday change of their children. As a result of this, they are accountable for how their children normally behave in reality. More importantly, considering the fact that people according to their social being are usually placed into diverse norms, parents, as a family, as a part of community and as individuals in the society, should appropriately behave in action so as to deliver a message to their kids in which what should be respected and cherished in lives is highly highlighted.

On the other hand, academic institutions should take the responsibility for educating students to be entirely ready to enter the society. After leaving parents for schools, kids almost devote their most prime time at schools with their peels, their friends and their teachers; therefore, schools ought to put much emphasis on their growth as a person. Consequently, students could learn what they cannot acquire from home, such as communicative skills, understanding of various cultures etc.

5.雅思大作文

楼主，你好，我这里有一篇雅思大作文，相信对你有用。

雅思作文高分：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？ 本文是一篇8分的雅思作文高分，文章中有许多的高分句型以及运用的恰到好处的高分词组、词汇，文章的题目是：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？现将译文及分享给大家，希望对备考雅思的朋友能够有所帮助。中文标题：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？译文如下： 在当代社会，似乎职业工作这在提高生产力，并给其他人提供直接的服务，而在体育和娱乐方面的名人没有做出此等贡献。

因此，有人认为职业工作者应该比明星得到更多的报酬。然而，我不同意他们的意见，原因如下。

职业工作者个人对社会的贡献不像名人那么多。任何一个职业工作者不像体育或是娱乐名人那样能够在专业领域给大众带来快乐。

并且，同样地，单个职业雇员不能够给国家带来荣耀，也不能提升人们的名族归属感。否则，他们能够做到的话，报酬就不会少。

职业工作者（如医生、护士和老师等）的能够使可以被训练和复制的，而明人的天赋是不可以的。一个普通人能够通过受教育和训练去做那些专业的工作，但是，没有那么的人通过受教育和训练能够打篮球打得像姚明一样好，也没有那么多人跳舞能够跳舞跳得想杰克逊那也好。

此外，缺少的一个职业专家能被另一人所代替，而缺少一位名人可能会导致某一领域发展的限制。 不可否认，由于大量的人们在专业领域工作并且直接服务于大众，他们看起来，至少表面上是与公众的生活水平的提升有着更加亲密的联系。

然而，在这个信息时代，当人们更多地关注与精神生活并且能比较单间的获取必要信息时，职业工作者所创造的价值就没有名人所创造的价值高。总之，我不同意职业工作者应该比体育和娱乐名人的工资高的观点。

只有当一个人的价值通过其对社会的全面贡献来衡量的时候，社会每个领域才能得到全面的发展。本文源自雅思救星。

英文标题：Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ 如下： It seems that, in this society, professional workers are improving the productivity and providing direct service to others, while celebrities in sports and entertainment are not making such contributions. Therefore, some people claim a higher pay for the former over the latter. However, I would show my disagreement to their statement for the following reasons. Professional workers do not contribute so much to society as celebrities in person. Any single worker in the professional field is not able to bring the happiness to such a large population as a famous person in sports or entertainment does. Also, an individual professional employee cannot similarly bring glories to the country and enhance people's sense of belongings to the nation. Otherwise, if they can, their payment will not be less. Unlike the talents in celebrities that are invaluable, the abilities of professional workers, such as doctors, nurses and teachers can be trained and copied. An ordinary person can be educated or trained to be engaged in those professional jobs, but not so many can be taught to play basketball so well as Yaomin and dance so gracefully as Jackson. Besides, the lack of a professional worker can be soon replaced by another one, while the loss of a celebrity may result in the limit of development in a certain field. Admittedly, due to the large population of people working in professional fields and the direct service people receive from them, they may seem, at least superficially, be more closely related to the improvement of the life level of the public. However, in this information age when people are attaching more importance to their spiritual life and easier in obtaining information needed, the value produced by professional workers is not so high as that brought by the celebrities. To sum up, I do not agree with the idea for professional workers to earn a higher salary than the sports and entertainment personalities. Only when a man's value is measured by his overall contribution to society, can every field in the world be developed to its full.。

6.雅思作文万能模版

雅思小作文写作万能模板 1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____，也说明了结果是___ According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________. 2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、（内容）的图片（这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。）

There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________. 3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___ Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________. 4、目前，共同之处是_________，许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____ Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________. 5、（图表所示）_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________ ______________， just like many other things, are preferred by ____________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.。

7.感恩剑桥作文

我来自偶然像一颗尘土 有谁看出我的脆弱 我来自何方我情归何处 谁在下一刻呼唤我 天地虽宽这条路却难走 我看遍这人间坎坷辛苦 我还有多少爱我还有多少泪 要苍天知道我不认输 感恩的心感谢有你 伴我一生让我有勇气作我自己 感恩的心感谢命运 花开花落我一样会珍惜 感恩的心感谢有你 伴我一生让我有勇气作我自己 感恩的心感谢命运 花开花落我一样会珍惜 <感恩的心>英文歌词 I come from being like a dust by chance Have who see my flimsiness of I come from what square my feeling return where Who at under a moment calls me World although this road of breadth but difficult walk I see the frustrated pain of this human life How much I still have to love me to still have how much tears Want the heaven knows my gameness Heart of feel grateful the with gratitude has you Companion I make me courageous to make myself from cradle to the grave The heart of feel grateful thank destiny The flower blooms to fall me similar will cherish I come from being like a dust by chance Have who see my flimsiness of I come from what square my feeling return where Who at under a moment calls me World although this road of breadth but difficult walk I see the frustrated pain of this human life How much I still have to love me to still have how much tears Want the heaven knows my gameness Heart of feel grateful the with gratitude has you Companion I make me courageous to make myself from cradle to the grave The heart of feel grateful thank destiny The flower blooms to fall me similar will cherish Heart of feel grateful the with gratitude has you Companion I make me courageous to make myself from cradle to the grave The heart of feel grateful thank destiny The flower blooms to fall me similar will cherish。

8.求雅思剑桥9的test1大作文的翻译

Children's education has long been our concern since Plato once uttered, "Education is where a country should start at." However, it is still a controversial issue after all these years among people who are particularly concerned about it. Some people believe that it is parents' responsibility to cultivate their kids to be fully aware of what a social being should look like; others, whereas, argue that schools should take over this for the ultimate goal. In this essay, I would put this issue in question and further analyse both sides before presenting my personal perspective. On one hand, parents, as the first touchers of their kids, should tell them how to differentiate right from wrong. Given the time parents spend with their kids, they can be more likely to observe everyday change of their children. As a result of this, they are accountable for how their children normally behave in reality. More importantly, considering the fact that people according to their social being are usually placed into diverse norms, parents, as a family, as a part of community and as individuals in the society, should appropriately behave in action so as to deliver a message to their kids in which what should be respected and cherished in lives is highly highlighted. On the other hand, academic institutions should take the responsibility for educating students to be entirely ready to enter the society. After leaving parents for schools, kids almost devote their most prime time at schools with their peels, their friends and their teachers; therefore, schools ought to put much emphasis on their growth as a person. Consequently, students could learn what they cannot acquire from home, such as communicative skills, understanding of various cultures etc.。

9.我的梦想是上剑桥大学作文400字

我第一次到厦门大学，是为了找王教授上声乐课。那时我不过十岁，记得刚到校门口，我就被厦门大学那雄伟壮丽的景色给迷住了，于是，我就想，以后要是能来这里上学，那该多好啊！就这样，厦门大学开始成为我梦想中的大学。

随着时间的推移，我渐渐地长大，同时，我也开始明白，一个好的大学，仅仅具有漂亮的景色是不够的，更重要的是它要有丰富的内涵。我开始寻找答案：原来厦门大学是著名爱国华侨陈嘉庚先生于1921年创办的，距今已有87年的历史。它是一所学科门类齐全、师资力量雄厚、居国内一流、在国际上有广泛影响的综合性大学。最让我心仪的还是它的音乐系！有音乐教育和音乐表演两个专业，有声乐、钢琴、民乐、器乐、理论作曲、舞蹈等专业课程，其宗旨是以综合大学为依托，以艺术创作为中心，以学兼中西为基础，以开发潜能为目标，培养全面又专业的艺术人才。我想：这不正是我理想中的大学吗？！音乐系不正是我梦寐以求的吗？！如果将来要报考大学，那么就报厦门大学吧，我相信我的选择绝对没错！

不管是在小学还是在中学，我时常会听到关于哥哥姐姐报考厦门大学的消息。记得我读五年级的时候，有一天邻居晓温姐姐要去厦门大学参加入学测试，当时，我曾问过爸爸：我以后能不能像晓温姐姐那样也报考厦门大学？爸爸是这样回答的： “当然可以，不过你的学习成绩要非常好。你知道吗？晓温姐姐在年段里的名次都是数一数二的，只要你努力学习，爸爸妈妈相信你一定能行的！”

爸爸的这一番话一直鼓励着我，考入厦门大学——我梦中的理想大学，一直成为我的精神支柱，成为我学习的动力！一晃，2年过去了，也许正是因为这个原因，我在升学考试中超常发挥，考了个全班第一！进入中学以来，依靠这一信念，我克服了种种不适，我的名次正在渐渐地提高！我相信，只要我努力学习，我的梦想就一定能实现的！